4 thoughts on “Slow and steady wins the race By Maya B”

  1. Oh My Gosh! That was amazing. Your essay had beautiful sensory imagery and the ending felt like a rock just dropped to the bottom of my heart. The detail and diction made it so touching. Such a great job!

  2. Good Job Maya! I liked how you explained your believe and stated it very clearly. Also, I liked how you used sensory imagery in the beginning of the essay. Great Job! 🙂

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