5 thoughts on “I Believe by Lilly A.”

  1. Lilly,
    It was a good Belief and this belief can teach people that are racist that theirs is nothing different about us we are all tha same in our ways.

  2. Your anecdotes did prove a point! I love your descriptions! Your voice throughout the essay was very strong and meaningful. Your intro hooked me and I almost fell off in the conclusion. Thanks for leaving me hanging!

  3. Lilly I loved how you told your story with alot of depth and emotion i could really understand how you felt

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