4 thoughts on “This I Believe By Sara M”

  1. WOW! I really loved how you put your true thoughts and feelings to this essay. It was very good and I hope we do make the change in this world to bring all the girls to the experience of education.

  2. That was AWESOME!!! I loved how you really pored your heart into this! You didn’t use yourself as an example, but others! You did an amazing job! 🙂

  3. I really loved your essay! Your thoughts and ideas are very deep. You obviously think very deeply and feel very passionate about this!

  4. Great job Sarah! I really liked how stong your opinion was and how you used evidence like the girls in Africa and Malala to emphasize that the world needs to change. Also, great job in setting the right tone of voice changing from one emotion to another with your volume. Good job!

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