7 thoughts on “The I Believe by Lauren M.”

  1. Great job Lauren! You did a great job pressing why she was so important to you! (Flawless)

  2. I like how you start the essay about how unsure you were and then you though about it more and you came up with an amazing idea.
    I also like how you explained why your person inspired you.

  3. I like how when you were saying in what you believed in you gave examples and why you believed in that and how you related to it.

  4. Great believe Lauren! I think that this was well done to be relatable yet unique. Good anecdote. Good Job! 🙂

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