For my essay I wrote about my brother and how he guides me. I thought how important it was for me to write about my brother because it shows part of me and my identity by being thankful for my brother and that someday I want to be like him too.
I wrote about Bruno Mars because he inspired me with his music. It is relaxing. I chose to write about him because his music makes me get up and dance. It keeps me alive, it keeps me young. I believe in his inspiration and always will.
My ideas too me to deeper thinking and that is how I chose to write my essay about my brothers. I felt like I had a lot to write about my brothers. They mess with my feelings so I knew I could write about that and it turned out to be very deep thinking.
I wanted to write about someone very special and important to me. I decided to write about Justin Bieber because he is one of the pieces in my heart. I chose to write about Justin Bieber because he shows who I am and how much I love him. I also chose to write about him because I was able to show his identity and what makes him special to me.
Looking back on my essay, I wanted to find something that was important, but at the same time general. When I got a chance to think about what I wanted to write about, I went and turned on the TV, and a commercial was on. It was the commercial on the Disney channel about loyalty. I was searching for something to connect to loyalty. Then boom! It hit me. I found just the right story, or memory, to go with loyalty. I was searching for something that had meaning to me, and to others. That’s why I chose to believe in loyalty.